For a first attempt it's really good. I think her arms are a bit too long. Long arms look masculine because men tend to grow longer limbs in general, atleast to my understanding. Very long arms make the figure look apelike, there is something primitive, rough and beastlike about it. And that doesn't seem to be the direction you are going for. I think hand-joints should be where her crotch end, around that's where the hands begin. I actually like her face more than the lady sculpt you did after this piece, but that is of course also just personal preference.